Well, if you're looking for a comment, here's a couple.
First, it says that each appliance shall be serviced by a separate low pressure supply line from the locker to the appliance. Next, that the line shall be a continuous length starting from the regulator, shut off valve, or leak detector. Also, you have to have a shut off valve which can be operated from near the (each) appliance.
I guess this means that you can't manifold off a single regulator/shut off valve/ leak detector. I would guess that a dedicated shut off valve with a switch near the appliance would make the most sense (to me, at least.)
Also, Appendix A shows why we use propane. Less heat per gallon, but butane freezes a 32 deg F (as does water) and propane at -44 deg F. So I don't have to worry about that propane tank sitting outside freezing, just blowing up. And it does vent in the summer.
Boris